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文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
As Madam Curie once said,"Life is not easy for any one of us. We must work, and above all we must believe in ourselves,"which,though,not all of us understand it. Firstly,self-confidence means believing ourselves.Due to Chinese traditional culture and custom,many people mistake confidence for pride.In fact,those,full of optimism and confidence,are easier to succeed. Secondly,self-confidence is composed of many inspects,such as prefect test marks,sense of humour,good-looking appearance and so on.Therefore,we are supposed to seize every chance to widen our horizons and enrich our knowledge to improve our ability. Lastly,self-confidence can be cultivated by taking social activities.Making a speech,or taking an active part in debate will increase your confidence.In addition,it is an efficient way to pay compliments on ourselves. In a word,self-confidence is to our life what beacon is to ship.
