2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

In recent years,with the improvement of the internet, more and more people use computers in our common life.It is well-known that computers make the life more convenient and funny.No one can deny the fact that we cannot emphasise the importance of computers too much.If computers can think like human beings,it may be a good thing.Nevertheless,what a terrible thing that human beings think like computers! Why do I say like that? To begin, people think like computers, which means that we will live a life without innovation.Thus, we will never progress.What's more, people think like computers,which makes the communication without emotion.Therefore, humor,funny and love will gradually disappear. From what has been discussed above,we can easily draw a conclusion that computers are significant in our daily life, however,we cannot think like computers,and what we should do is to communicate with each other in realistic life instead of on the internet.