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A study have been published about teenagers' sharing their expressions with others in china last week.The phoclogy profesdor Kelly Lam made a interview. Here are the results. Whatever happiness or sadness,more than 30% teenagers do not like share their feeling with others.Because of our education, teenagers do not understand the importance of sharing. However,As the professor said, it is necessary for us to learn sharing in the morden world.what is more, learning how to sharing is very important,which is better for teenagers to grow up. So, in a word,learing to sharing with others can make your life more meaningful.