2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

nowadays, computer became indispensable part of our life.each of household almost have one computer. we use it to do something we want to solve.however ，everything divides into two，it has its pros and cons just as other things do. computer bring convenience to our life ,we can shopping 、do our homework ,search for information ,communicate with others. it short distance between us.thus ,more and more people can‘t leave it,pay more attention to it.even there exist the same kind of man we called them homebody.they stay their home ,and going out is less. but it have some disadvantage ,for example ,it do damage to our heath ,include eyes,fingers,skin.and when we meet some problems ,we don't think about it and try to answer at first, search for computer. we lose think of ourselves. so we must use it rightly.