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When we go to a supermarket,in which we will see a lot of nice commodity which have so wonderful packaging that you want to buy it.Nonetheless,if you done,you will feel terrible.Why it is?Many commodity packaging always make people have a deep impress that must be worthy. In fact,commodity is small and light,and liking packaging none too. And now,it is common! There is many reasons. First,we have an idea"good packaging commodity is nice",so we always chance commodity that look pretty nice and huge,but it is wrong!Second,trader thinks that if the packaging is not make people feel pleasant.the commodity will be sale slow or not. In my view,it is a huge fail!On the one hand,we will be waste of material which is imitation.On the other hand,it brings us society a bad habit. Today,we must do something immediately. Consumers don not buy excessive packing commodity,and just than,stop our family and friends.The important thing is trader who don not product it. In conclusion,we just have a mom earth
