2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on online shoping Nowadas,more and more people prefer to shop online,which is a common phenomenom. In my opinion,there are a lot of advertages about online shoping .For example,it is more convenient of us to buy what we need than going to store.what is more,because of it ,we can save more time for dealing with other things.Last but han not least,the goods is cheaper than ones in store.However,there are also some problems on online shoping.Such as,bad qaulity,cheating and so on...... From my point of view,I hope that the goverment should take more measures to rule owner of shop ,for us,we should pay more attentionto goods when we shop online.