题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。
Nowadays, computer is becoming more and more popular in society.Some people even think computer can replace human.Therefore, what are the usages of computer that it is so important in our life.Admitedly,computer have a great memory function from which we can found lots of information. For example,you can found many useful information when you need know acknowledge about learning.What is more,people is so rely on computer that some people feel bored or can do nothing without computer.Every coin has two sides. Not only we need learn computer technical but also control it not was controlled.