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When we go to a supermarket,in which we will see a lot of nice commodity which have so good packaging that you want to buy it.Nonetheless,if you done,you will feel terrible.Why is it?Mostly packaging always make people have a deep impressed that must be worthy. In fact,commodity is small and light,and liking packaging none too. And now,it is common! There are many reasons. First,we have an idea"good packaging commodity is nice",so we always select products that look pretty nice and tremendous,but it is wrong!Second,trader thinks that if the packaging do not make people feel pleasant.the commodity will be sale slow or not. In my view,it is a tremendous failure!On the one hand,we will be waste of material which is imitation.On the other hand,it brings us society a unfavorable habit. Today,we must do something right away. Consumers do not buy excessive packing commodity,and just than,stop our family and friends.The essential thing is trader who do not product it. In conclusion,we just have a earth.
