2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man As time went by,the technology developement is in a high speed.Computer pervades more and more families,is common to the middle class.It's almost like a indispensable part of working areas.Such as hospitals,schools,business afairs and other aspects.But even so ,how to make computers contributory to human ? We need to build a cultrual and moral social ethos.It can't be worked without hard working between government and people.Computers can be made to do many things by lacking the sense of the right and wrong.So the government should take efficent actions to prevent the inferior messages on internet.For the children ,the inferior messages can corrupt children's mind.In addition,parents should pay more attention to their child when they play the computer game,for fear that they would induge in computer games.For teenagers and adults,they shall cultivate the sense of right and wrong, so that they can avoid to commit crimes .And the government should make related laws to decrease the rate of crimes . The last but not least,people should distinguish the advantages and disadvantages of computer,then make good use of it .