2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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In nowadays, a issue is widely spreeding in megacities which indicates that the quality of life gets worse and wores. The supportors, who holding this opinion, usually give these reasons like working pressure, envionment pollutions, crowd population, and high expense of life. With the start, most people living in large cities stand very high stress of work, due to the frequency over-time and the afraid of lained off, especially for the physical labors. Secondly, as the smokely gas relesing from factories and cars, air in the cities often appears like fog with smell, which maybe make passive effects on people's health. Since there are more oppotunities in earning money, big cities offer much many working positions for the rural people and maintain a large population, however, it also leads to the crowd state everywhere and the terrible tranfic. As reasult of high density population and limited source, the prices of food, house, and other iterms which are nessceary of living are obvious overweigh to other places. All these problems in big cities make the citizens feel less happiness. Accoding to these causes, some suggestions could be given to the goverment. First of all, a stricter labor-protection law should be made and more holidays for labors should be encouraged. Secondly, envienment protection action should be taken in veriours fields, as a example, pushing the factory to set more clear-facilities. Thirdly, the large cities should move some low-technology industries to satelite-cities and disgather the population to around towns. Lastly, enhence the producting and commercal development, to enlarge the providing of food, fruits, house, etc to limit the increase of prices. As the development of cities, more and more problem come out, which lead to the decrease of life quality in large city. In this report, the mainly top four are presented, and also some operatable mearsures are suggested.