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As is known to us, a good learner is very popular in our dialy life. Thus, becoming a good learn is important in our life.So here are some advice for you. Not only do you know the importance of learing,but the effects of loving study.However, if you do not study hard, you will not succeed. First, you must know how important the plan is.And i also think thinking is also a better way as well as sum up. Next, there is no better way to learn than to make full use of resources you have.Besides,you had better combine study with play,which makes your life colorful.Last but not the least,what makes me succeed is that i work hard and have good ways to learn. There are all my opinion.I hope you can take my suggestion into condersion.