2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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According to the Synovate’s survey which among 11 countries and including 8000 volunteers , there are about 6000 people carry their mobile phone wherever they go， about 2000 people thought the mobile phone is more important than their wallet, even more than 3000 volunteers said they can not live if their phone was gone. There are always something new on the phone. It is can be interesting, mysterious and various. So people are eager to turn on their phones, want to know what is happening around them. When people spend too much time on the phones, they don’t have enough chance to communicate with their friends or parents. Their attentions have been drawn away by the virtual world.