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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46252
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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With the development of technology, telecommunication technology is used in people’s life widely. It brings convenience for people, but at the same time it also brought adverse effect. One of this is that, in the information era, with its convenient communication and fading lines between work and personal life, the people is hard to distinguish between what is work time and personal time. No mater where you are, only a message, a call or an e-mail can brings you from personal life to the work. This kind of life make people feel that the work time has occupied the personal time greatly and they are living under increasing pressure. For example, someone is playing with his little son after work, but a call from his boss makes him has to go back to the company. Otherwise, some people have to spent lots of personal time to due with clientele’ call or e-mail.

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