甘肃武威六中2013届高三第二次模拟试卷英语作文

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

Some of students think internet slang is very fashion and vivid.What is more,they also think it is full of intelligent and humourous. And they say the best advantage is that it can make chatting more easily in the internet. However ,some disagree with them.In their opinion,they think it is lock of thought,especialy not understand by some traditional people.Even they could misunderstand the meanings. From the view of mine, we had better use less internet slang.On the one hand,as many people said,there is less thought, which means it could not have a good effect in our mental health.On the other hand,with the development of economy,we should have more useful knowledge rather than humorous words.