题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误。
Recently,it is issue that whether we should on maintaining trust each other has been in the limelight.Some characters content that it is necessary for us.Only in this way can we make better friend. On the contrary,the majority individuals deem that it is not necessary to maintaining trust with others for this socity.To begin with ,they acknowledge that if you excess to trust some people,you may lose much money and your trusrt to them.Addition,if you maintaining trust some socity people,you will get much more matters.Last but not least,if you over to trust who always loses believe you will get trouble .So they object to it. What has been got perspecitive that we should maintaining trust from discussion.I take the side of the former point to some extent .Only in this way can we achieve to others' trust.