2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；部分学术词汇用的不错，但拼写检查还需加强。

Computer has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefit but has created some serious problems as well. Recentli, this problem has aroused people' s concern. People's views on thhis problem vary from person to person.Some hold that the computer is the best instrument that we have ever known.it's convenience to help ours to receive message and watching vedios.it't not only can horidon our horizon but also help ours to study a lot of knowledge. However, others believe that computerdoes harm to our life,expecially for teenager.it will deline our ability tobehave,and not good for ous to commuinate with each other.all in all,we cannot live without computer,but at the same time we must ty to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.then,our life will become more haappiness,more convenience.