拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Recently, the increasing number of people are concern that issues if we should keep communication with each other. Opinions are vary from person to person. With the developing technology,now we can use phone computer and internet to communication with other people all the time.Firstly,it is message time,people can get more information from others through communication,especially in the business.Secondly,in the academic both students and teachers should keep touch with each other.Discovery the truth is quite a hard work,so the teamwork is important.Thirdly,in the family we really should keep touch with others,through the communication we can show to others there is someone is caring about he or she.However quite a few people consider that it is not necessary that we communication with other all the time,thanks to the internet,we can get everything we need:the news messages,and so on. From my way of thinking,we should keep communication with others all the time.For one thing communication can let us get together On the other hand we really need to talk with other people.
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