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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4563
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分80.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Recently, the increasing number of people are concern that issues if we should keep communication with each other. Opinions are vary from person to person. With the developing technology,now we can use phone computer and internet to communication with other people all the time.Firstly,it is message time,people can get more information from others through communication,especially in the business.Secondly,in the academic both students and teachers should keep touch with each other.Discovery the truth is quite a hard work,so the teamwork is important.Thirdly,in the family we really should keep touch with others,through the communication we can show to others there is someone is caring about he or she.However quite a few people consider that it is not necessary that we communication with other all the time,thanks to the internet,we can get everything we need:the news messages,and so on. From my way of thinking,we should keep communication with others all the time.For one thing communication can let us get together On the other hand we really need to talk with other people.

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