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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Youth,How beautiful and sad!Previously,I always like to say,In addition to the youth I have nothing at all.But now I only can say,Time is like water flowing away quickly.Always let me unprepared.When I was young, I’m invariably looking forward to growing.Full of longing for the future.I thought I should be an intellectual woman.Possess beauty,wisdom,career.As I grew older,I began to realize that the reason my dream was even born,was because it was something that was inside of me.The dream I had never nurtured and cared for,so it slowly dead.And now I finally woke up.We always have time to complain that life is too realistic but don’t have time to reflect on yourself.Always have time to complain about unfairness of God but don’t have time to reflect on yourself what you pay.Most of the time,we just didn’t work hard enough.
