2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂，需要多使用一些学术词汇；上下文衔接手法不熟练，没有能够有效的使用衔接词。

In recently,computer is more and more important.I can't imagine the day that we live without computer. Is that OK we use computer so much? Some people think that it's 21 century,and we must use a lot of good instruments to improve our work and help our study.We can't waste a lot time in calculting the data.Man can have much time to do something that they like instead of doing something that computer can do better than you. But other people don't think so.They believe that we should use computer less.Because computer make their children foolish.While their children find some questions that they can't solve,they will use the computer to search for the answers.But one day we don't have a computer,what can we do ? I think that the computer is so important.Man can use it to improve our lives,not only play games.We should make use of it.What do you think?