2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

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With the advances of democratic economic and society,charity work has provoked a great consideration and be the mainstream of human beings .To such a situation ,different ones have different perspective about it. First saying is that charity work matters to nobody but the rich.It seems like there never admittedly be someone do some charity whom can not even make a living by himself.The another view think that there is no discimination between the task of social contribution ,when having our conditions,we can do any part for someone who needs helps.