学术词汇积累做的很棒,不过请认真检查词汇的拼写;有效的运用了一些复杂句;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Students, as the future of promsing, has a big responsibility to boost the development of country. Therefore, concerntrating on the students, not only in physical health, but also in mental health, is can not be waited. Now,the problems of students' mental health are emerging and magnifing to threaten the students. Improving the mental health of students are regared as goal to enforce in society. Most time of students are staying in the campuse, school must take actions to help students to enhance the psychology of students. Firstly, creating a phenonmon with relax and active can keep the students have good emotion. Secondly, when students face the trouble and can not sovle it by themselves, school should encouage students or guide students to ovecom it. As students are, we can not ignore our health mental and do our best to reinforce our mental. What way shoud do is to read more books to enrich our mind, broaden our horizons, to take part in more acitivty to keep a happy day