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2008年12月英语六级作文真题:提高心理健康

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:33浏览次数:1956
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题目 How to improve student's mental health
要求
1.学生心理健康的重要性
2.学校应该怎样做
3.学生自己应该怎样做
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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学术词汇积累做的很棒,不过请认真检查词汇的拼写;有效的运用了一些复杂句;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Students, as the future of promising, have a big responsibility to boost the development of country. Therefore, concentrating on the students, not only in physical health, but also in mental health, is can’t be waited. Now, the problems of students' mental health are emerging and magnifying to threaten the students. Improving the mental health of students is regarded as goal to enforce in society. Most time of students are staying in the campus, school must take actions to help students to enhance the psychology of students. Firstly, creating a phenomenon with relax and active can keep the students have good emotion. Secondly, when students face the trouble and can’t solve it by themselves, school should encourage students or guide students to overcome it. As students are, we can’t ignore our health mental and do our best to reinforce our mental. What way we should do is to read more books to enrich our mind, broaden our horizons, to take part in more activities to keep a happy day

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