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It is widely accepted that everyone has a name. what's more, it even repersent a significant sence for someone. So name is important to us. However,someone disagrees with it. On the one hand, some people hold the view that the name is absolutely important. And hold the view that once name accompanyed you till your death. And a good name also a better recommend people oneslf to others, they can keep your name in mind easily and it is good to next converse. On the other hand, a little of people insist that a name just a code for a person and it can not play a essential role in our daily life. From my perspective, I think the name is a advertisement to us. We should make good use of it.