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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1772
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题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
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It is widely accepted that everyone has a name. what's more, it even repersent a significant sence for someone. So name is important to us. However,someone disagrees with it. On the one hand, some people hold the view that the name is absolutely important. And hold the view that once name accompanyed you till your death. And a good name also a better recommend people oneslf to others, they can keep your name in mind easily and it is good to next converse. On the other hand, a little of people insist that a name just a code for a person and it can not play a essential role in our daily life. From my perspective, I think the name is a advertisement to us. We should make good use of it.

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