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作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Students, as the future of promising, have a big responsibility to boost the development of economy in our country. Therefore, concentrating on the students, not only in physical health, but also in mental health, is time to highlight it. Now, the problems of students' mental health are emerging and magnifying to threaten the students. Improving the mental health of students is regarded as goal to enforce in society. Most time of students are staying in the campus, school must take actions to help students to enhance the psychology of students. Firstly, creating a phenomenon with relax and active, in this way can keep the students have good emotion. Secondly, when students face the trouble and can’t solve it by themselves, school should encourage students or guide students in how to overcome it. As students are, we can’t ignore our health mental and do our best to reinforce our health mental. What we should do is to read more books to enrich our mind, broaden our horizons, to take part in more activities to keep a happy day.
