拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
It is widely accepted that everyone has a name. What's more, it even represents some significant senses. So name is important to us. However,someone disagrees with it. On the one hand, some people hold the view that the name is absolutely important. And hold the view that once name accompanied you till your death. And you can make a better introduction to other people with a good name, they can keep your name in mind easily and it is good to next converse. On the other hand, some people insist that name just a code for a person and it cannot play any role in our daily life. From my perspective, I think the name can advertise us well. We should make good use of it.