2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；请注意分段。

I would like to record what have happened in my daiyl life rather than just write the specified subject.Today can't be say too busy, I though I will have a easy ,but things always out of your imagined and controlled, in the late of closed,the fedex expresser have came and said there have something wrong with my schedule that the goods can't be expressed directly which was over 100kg,and should declare customs clearance. What a bad news!Finally with the expresser advise and help,I deliver the goods by two parts. According to above,I will remember the detials next time