希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是学术词汇的积累;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。
nowadays,more and more museums have been open to public freely .about this question, as we all know ,no garden without weeds. i think it aims to let more and more people learn our country,s history in order to know our country well.but it also has disadvantage .for museum is free,there have free people who don't want to know the history of our country,and they maybe destroy the art work.but people like this is fewer. in my opinion i be in favor of museums' opening.because almost people like history and want to know history .