2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段。

In recent years, there is an increasing number of people, especially youngsters, who use the internet in their common life. When it comes to the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication, the views vary from person to person. The internet plays a significant role in the communication with others who are in a distance. No one can deny the fact that we can’t emphasize the importance of the internet too much. Nonetheless, it appears that the internet is too convenient to a fault. Only the internet, however, a large quantity of people use to communicate with friends, classmates and families, no matter how near they are. Thus, they are reluctant to communicate with people face-to-face. From what is mentioned above, we can safely draw the conclusion that the internet contributes to communicating conveniently, at the expense of interpersonal communication face-to-face. Hence, what we must do is to communicate more with families and friends in real life instead of on the internet.