考研作文：人脑和电脑的不同

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In judging from what is detailedly demonstrated in the above diagram, we can observe distinctly that it shows the hours spent on entertainment by folks in seven different age groups,including teenagers,20s,30s,40s,50s,60s and 70s,in their leisure time. According to the figures which is provided,as citizens age in Someland their social lives reduce.Teenagers and people in their twenties spend on average 500 hours a year on socializing and 350 hours of that time is with a group of four people.Although the total houses of socializing in their 30s,40s and 60s is fairly constant,socializing with more than four inhabitants drops dramatically to 50 hours in the 30s and 40s age groups and only 25 hours for 50 years old.Grop an individual exercise follow a similar pattern. People of all ages spend a good part of their leisure time on entertainment such as TV/video viewing and cinema.In both cases,teenager and retired person spend almost twice as much time as those who are at working age.Home entertainment ranges just from over 1000 hours for teenagers and retired people and an average of 600 hours for everybody else.Cinema accounts for 100 hours of the teenagers and retired people's leisure time and 25-50 hours for the rest. Consequently,we have no difficulty but can obtain a conclusion that there is a significant trend towards solitude as people grow older and teenager and retired people spend a lot more time on entertainment than those of working age do.