2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

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Today,it is well known that the quality of life in large cities is decreasing.It is no doubt that many vegetables and rice have lost the taste in the past decades and that the sky is grey.Eeven more and more people have lost their confidence in life so that some of them choose to eacape from reality. What are the causes? So far as I know that there are reseans as follow:first,enviroment pollution has changed the qualities of vegetables and rice.In the final analysis human is the very culprit.Human make use of excessive chemical fertilizer and pestcide that follows into waters finally.Then it is absorbed by the plants and crops.Now we have realized that it is one of the mainly hazard for health of human. second,health is concerned by more and more people.It is found that more and more weird disease threaten the health of people.Meanwhile,the youth feel that they have to deal with the problerms such as a house、cars and jobs. What are the solutions? it is the first to be affected that we must take action to strengthen environment management.We should reduce the use of chemical fertilizer and pestcide and recover the use of organic fertilizer.At the same time ,we must return the grain plots to forestry and afforestation.On the other hand,we should spend more time in doing exercises and try our best to ensure a healthy diet and learn to adjust mood. In brief,the quality of life is raising with our progress.Environment management and self-control is the best way to improve the quality of life .