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文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
For the considerable proportion of people,television has become the main source of news,which is regretful.There are many reasons contributing to newspaper as a better source of information. In fact,television program can't amply report and describe some events by the limitation of page table.On the contrary,newspaper can not compared with television in picture.however,It can accord the need to report news.Thus,newspaper hold great superiority over television at the point.Apart form this, the essence of television is passive medium.No matter the news we like it or not,what we can do is waiting at the front of television until the end of it.Whereas,for newspaper, you can choose these news that you are interesting in and ignore these news that you dislike. Furthermore，you can read it at any time whenever you want to do.Therefore,the most important thing that can improve our literacy .Although it is monotonous for us to read a newspaper,reading is helpful for the development of our brain. When we explore and analyse both newspaper and television in the dept and range. do you still not think the newspaper is the better source of information.
