2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

文章学术词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

How should parents help children to be independent With the economy developing,many families have entered the well-off family.To ensure generations' well-being,not a few parents take the initiative to arrange everything for their children. There's no denying that the above-mentioned parents's deeds will bring great convenience to their children.However.the disadvantage outweighs the advantage.With all the things finished,children don't bother to do everything,which may lead to lack of independence. From my perspective,children should be given opportunity to be independent.Only when we learn how to be independent,can we make significant contributions to the world.