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Recently I have some trouble in my life and study,which made me very upset,and I hope that you can give me some suggestions to reduce the pressure.As I have always been a great basketball player on the school team,the coach has the distant prospect that I am able to become a basketball star.But my parents do not think that I have a outstanding academic achievement and insist me that I should spend more time improving my grades so that I have more opportunity to go to a great college.The fact that spending most of time in contests makes my parents annoyed because I have not enough time for studying.As a result,I am not allowed to attend the contests.As for me,I am crazy about basketball,and would like to do more exercise.My ambition is to be a superstar.