单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
I have a good friend. Her name is Alice. She is my classmate. She is tall and thin. She can dance and sing. She can speak english very well. Every day I go to school with her. She has two big eyes, and a tall nose. She likes dress and swim.