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字数：300 满分：100分
有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分；句式变化较为明显，句法基础不错；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇。
Today,most people use lots of money,because they have to buy a lot of things.Although we hate to waste money more than we have,we have to buy the things which we need to use everyday.As a student,we always spent money in eating,shoping and buying some books.But we are careful of the money where we use,because the money is from our parents.So we buy everythings that is on sale.While some people thought this was not a smart consumer,but I do not think so.In my opinion,I think it is very smart and good to do in this way. In order to support my opinion,here are three reasons can be lists.Firstly,as a student,I not have many money to buy some expensive things.So,I can save my money after buying something what I need that they were on sale.Secondly,not only can I buy cheap things,but also I can buy good things when the goods on sale.Thirdly,saving money is a traditional virtue in China.Last but not leave,to save money is one of the qualities of a good student. All in all,I do not think someone who buying things on sale in order to save money is not a smart consumer.
