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study is a very meaningfull things . but ,we should how to study ? it is have lot of issue. Have a lot of people think to study what should have a choice .but ,on the other people think to study what should no choise . on my view .i think studing should have a choice.becasue study one better than study evey way . pay attention to stady one is so easy to make a prograss. i supossed study every thing.