Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Last sunday ,it was a typical day for me ,because I got a part-time job in the downtown,I had to get up early .Before going to work,I went to eat breakfirst quickly and got into the bus.Then I arrived at the place where I work.And the boss arranged the job for me.After that I began to do my first part-time job for a whole day .Finally ,the boss gave me the salary that I should get.It was a very typical day that I had never experienced before.