2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；有效的运用了一些复杂句；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

One hero who is strong always descrbile a colorful experience on their life.Such as Edison,who leads to a electric revolution ,is greetful in that century.Nonetheless,it is easy none too which fail a thousand times,though experiment the outcome of increasingly successful.And so,there is a word we can know nothing succeeds without a strong will and whenever you are ready will be fine. So am students,who don't hard working and try again and again,the will be struck with vengeance. And besides,students must overcome difficult whatever it is so pretty tremendous.In reality,if we use us all power,all dream will be came to fruition. From my perspective,I hold that when we gain has to work hard which can image easy not at all.