2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

A successful people who is strong and always describe a colorful experience on their life.Such as Edison,who leads a revolution ,is grateful in that century.Nonetheless,it is easy none too which fail a lot of times,though experiment the outcome of increasingly successful.And so,there is a word we can know nothing succeeds without a strong will and whenever you are ready will be fine. So am students,who don't hard working and try again and again,the will be struck with a vengeance. And besides,students must overcome difficult whatever it is so pretty tremendous.In reality,if we use us all power,all dream will come to fruition. From my perspective,I hold that we obtain something that it needs us work hard which can do easy not at all.