作者能较灵活地使用词汇,学术词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;采用了一些简单的从句。
In recent years, communication by internet has been prevailing among youngs. What does it impacts us on interpersonal communication? There are some following ones. First and the foremost, the communication face to face among people has been passed. Now, if you want to make new firends you neednot to take part in the party. Moreover,you can know people that have same interest even you don't see her or him ever and just get a name from the internet. On the other hand it makes possible that shopping on internet only we have a deep communication with seller can we know what we want is suit for us. It promotes the development of eonomic. In conclusion, the using of computer to communication makes our life rich and colorful.
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