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假如你是李华，是育英中学的学生。五月十二日四川地震爆发后，你和你的同学度过了几个不眠之夜。请写一篇120词左右的短文，介绍你们那几天的主要活动及感受，向21世纪英文报投稿。
要点如下：
1．每晚观看新闻，关注灾区救援工作的进展；提示：
灾区 the striken area遇难者 victims默哀observe silence
文章组织结构良好；能够运用简单的从句，但不熟练；文中词汇表达较恰当，学术词汇表达灵活；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
when the earthquake in sichuan provice,i watch the news everyday to see The mission of the National Earthquake Information Center (NEIC) is to determine rapidly the location and size of all destructive earthquakes worldwide and to immediately disseminate this information to concerned national and international agencies, scientists, and the general public. The NEIC compiles and maintains an extensive, global seismic database on earthquake parameters and their effects that serves as a solid foundation for basic and applied earth science research.
