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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
评语:

文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉;句法方面做的很棒,加强复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

In recent years, communication by internet has been prevailing among youngs. What does it impacts us on interpersonal communication? First and the foremost, the communication face to face among people has been passed. Now, if you want to make new firends you need not to take part in the party. Moreover,you can know people that have same interest even you don't see her or him ever and just get a domain name. On the other hand it makes shopping on internet possible , only we have a deep communication with seller can we know what we want is suit for us. In other words it promotes the development of economic. In conclusion, the using of computer to communication makes our life rich and colorful.

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