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In recent years, communication by internet has been prevailing among youngs. What does it impacts us on interpersonal communication? First and the foremost, the communication face to face among people has been passed. Now, if you want to make new firends you need not to take part in the party. Moreover,you can know people that have same interest even you don't see her or him ever and just get a domain name. On the other hand it makes shopping on internet possible , only we have a deep communication with seller can we know what we want is suit for us. In other words it promotes the development of economic. In conclusion, the using of computer to communication makes our life rich and colorful.
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