Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Just read an areticle about “Lenovo large layoffs”the recording paper.Theme is “the company can only give you the location,but can not give you a future.”This sentence touched me deeply inside.Indeed, No matter how you sacrifice their lives for the company , when the company does not need you, you have to do everything is no longer meaningful.But think about it from another angle,the relationship between employees and the company is interested,do not put the company as a home.I feelings is very complex at the moment.Now is an era of survival of the futtest,A large international companies have always faced the risk of failure.Then how about me?How can I survive? Without diploma, without skills, And even can’t smile in the face of everyday. What else do I have? How to achieve my goals?