2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章词汇丰富度较好，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

computer and man With the development of society ,computers were used much more than ten years ago. The relationship between computers an people has changed a lot. Some people hold on the view that computers is harmful to our lives.The grade of students who addicted to computer games became down and down.Adults who lost themselves in the computer games lost their jobs.More and more families being hurt by the computer so that lots of people dislike the copmtures. Howevver,another people have the different idea of computers.They think computers are good assistants of our lives such as shopping online searching informations and entertainment and so on. They help us so much that we couldn't separate from them during the work and lives. As far as i am concerned,computers are the most essential equipment for many people and there are more advantages than disadvanges in the use of computer.Yet ,different people may have different attitudes toward it ,but we must realize that computers in itself is neither good nor bad.It is value to people and society depends on how we look at it.