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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46262
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

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Just read an article about “Lenovo large layoffs”the record.Theme is “the company can only give you the location,but cannot give you a future.”This sentence touched me deeply inside. No matter how do you work for the company, when the company does not need you, you have to do everything is no longer meaningful.Think about it from another angle,the relationship between employees and the company is interested,do not put the company as a home. Is very complex in mood at the moment.In this era of survival of the fittest,A large international companies have always faced the risk of failure. How about me?How can I survive? I have nothing at all and even didn't smile everyday. What else do I have? How to achieve my goals?

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