Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Just read an article about “Lenovo large layoffs”the record.Theme is “the company can only give you the location,but cannot give you a future.”This sentence touched me deeply inside. No matter how do you work for the company, when the company does not need you, you have to do everything is no longer meaningful.Think about it from another angle,the relationship between employees and the company is interested,do not put the company as a home. Is very complex in mood at the moment.In this era of survival of the fittest,A large international companies have always faced the risk of failure. How about me?How can I survive? I have nothing at all and even didn't smile everyday. What else do I have? How to achieve my goals?