2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇表达不够丰富，学术词汇方面要多累积；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；副词使用偏多。

The sunshine is so brightly and warm, What a nice day. However, why the urgency things always come out when every things is seems smoothly ? It is really unreasonably. Tomorrow is Friday that is really exciting news.I will go home and see my sister who have borned a lovely girl not long ago. It seems I don't have much word to said.