题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
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Nowadays,Computer become more and more popular.Human cannot live without computer.However,this phenomenon is not all good.We should better deal with the human and computer. First,Computers bring a lot of new things.Computer makes our lives much convient.For example,we can get news from Internet at home.We can shopp online and in house. Second,Computer also brings some unfavorable things.For example,children are addicted to computer games ,and they cut class and make it a habit. After all, we should make better use of computer,but we must control the time and vigor.