2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education Pays From the form above we can see that the high education you take the much salary you receive,And the high education people are face with less possible of unemployment. Following the form ,the employers who less than high school diploma can get 451 dolor a week ,but the employ who get professional degree can receive 1665 dolor a week.