2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；但从句使用不熟练，注意平时练习中多积累；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

Nowadays,Computer becomes more and more popular.Human cannot live without a computer.However,this phenomenon is not all good.We had better to deal with the human and computer. First,Computers bring a lot of new things.Computer makes our lives convenient.For example,we can get news from Internet at home.We can shop online and in house. Second,Computer also brings some unfavorable things.For example,children are addicted to computer games,and they cut class and make it a habit. After all, we should make better use of computer,but we must control the time and vigor.