2013年5月16日雅思大作文真题:广告的副作用

作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用学术词汇；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Advertisement can be seen everywhere. whether people love or hate it, it affects our lives in an invisible way. When shopping in the supermarkets, people will be kept reminded of the advertisements upon catching sight of some certain products. They can't be stopped to flash in the mind. Vivid descriptions, pretty models and happy expressions are all persuading people into buying the products. On account of the above elements, people always buy some things that they do not need actually, which contributes to over-consuming and even waste. What's worse, some advertisements offer false information or exaggerated facts, which misleads people to create unrealistic imagination or make unwise decisions. However, there is no denying that some advertisements are playing an essential part in educating people to care for parents, paying attention to their own behavior or speeches or keep healthy mentally and physically. In conclusion, advertising is very important in the daily life. People should treat them rationally. On the other hand, the government should take action to stop the false advertisements to protect the consumers. At the same time, monitoring the advertising field could not be forgotten.